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Text from Maestro323 - English

  • Help me to write correctly this business letter, please.

  • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
  • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Vakya 1
    • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2