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  • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
  • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.

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    • According to our plan of saling via the Internet we are sure that such volume (100 units) will be sold in the course of work.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • But at the initial stage we wouldn't like to do the initial order for the large sum of money to have opportunity to begin work gradually.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2