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To my person
Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
I hope, that we'll have fun together.
My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.

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- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
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- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
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- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
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- My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.
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