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從Hendrik97來的文本 - English

  • To my person

  • Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
  • I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
  • I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  • My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.

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