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  • A Common Hobby in Ocean University

  • Basketball was a very popular sport in ocean university, and many students play it as interest in spare time.
  • Thought basketball seems as the sport for boys, all colleges had basketball teams of boys and girls.
  • Even a special association of basketball referee has established by students to cultivate professional referees for varied basketball matches.
  • A great number of students had fondness to speat spare time on playing basketball and found great fun from it.
  • No matter in the hot summer days or cold windy days, different scale of competitions were held on basketball fields, and the most competitive one is the Chancellor Cup which was a basketball match between colleges.
  • During that period, the shops and companies in our campus were willing to be the sponsors of the competition, because they thought basketball was a prevailing sport in ocean university and this basketball match was so popular among students therefore attracting more attention and establishing good reputation in the student customers.
  • Both girls and boys in Ocean University liked playing basketball, and many different competitions would be hold throughout the year.

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    • No matter in the hot summer days or cold windy days, different scale of competitions were held on basketball fields, and the most competitive one is the Chancellor Cup which was a basketball match between colleges.
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    • During that period, the shops and companies in our campus were willing to be the sponsors of the competition, because they thought basketball was a prevailing sport in ocean university and this basketball match was so popular among students therefore attracting more attention and establishing good reputation in the student customers.
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