수정본

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!수정되지 않은

AhmedMusc (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

Weight loss!
Hi everyone, I wish all of you are happy and having a good day!
I was 176 lbs last month, I had to lose 22 lbs to be at perfect weight.
I've started dieting and exercising since a month, I lost 9 lbs during that 30 days.
But now there is no time for cardio workout.
And because of the pressure of studying for exams, I lost my determination to continue the diet.
I drink a lot of tea and coffee with massive amount of sugar which is restricted in diet.
Any Suggestions, please?
I wish i wrote it right, it will motivate me to learn more English.

제목
- Weight loss!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Hi everyone, I wish all of you are happy and having a good day!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I was 176 lbs last month, I had to lose 22 lbs to be at perfect weight.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I've started dieting and exercising since a month, I lost 9 lbs during that 30 days.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- But now there is no time for cardio workout.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- And because of the pressure of studying for exams, I lost my determination to continue the diet.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I drink a lot of tea and coffee with massive amount of sugar which is restricted in diet.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- Any Suggestions, please?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- I wish i wrote it right, it will motivate me to learn more English.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8