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從AhmedMusc來的文本 - English

Weight loss!
Hi everyone, I wish all of you are happy and having a good day!
I was 176 lbs last month, I had to lose 22 lbs to be at perfect weight.
I've started dieting and exercising since a month, I lost 9 lbs during that 30 days.
But now there is no time for cardio workout.
And because of the pressure of studying for exams, I lost my determination to continue the diet.
I drink a lot of tea and coffee with massive amount of sugar which is restricted in diet.
Any Suggestions, please?
I wish i wrote it right, it will motivate me to learn more English.

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- Weight loss!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi everyone, I wish all of you are happy and having a good day!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I was 176 lbs last month, I had to lose 22 lbs to be at perfect weight.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I've started dieting and exercising since a month, I lost 9 lbs during that 30 days.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- But now there is no time for cardio workout.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- And because of the pressure of studying for exams, I lost my determination to continue the diet.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I drink a lot of tea and coffee with massive amount of sugar which is restricted in diet.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Any Suggestions, please?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I wish i wrote it right, it will motivate me to learn more English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8