添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

linny123からのテキスト - English

  • My weakness

  • I was a little arbitrariness before.
  • During the graduation practice in Chine, the work carried on fast and I didn’t care enough details so that I have done some useless work at the beginning.
  • Because of this experience now I try to collect information as much as possible and reflective before I make a decision or set about doing sth.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English