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It is believed that spending time on developing one’s career is very important for some people.

However, others think that spending time with relatives and mates is more important.

This essay is going to discuss both points of views and point out some advantages for a person in spending time with people who are important to them.

In the modern world career development has become one of the elements of a successful person, so this kind of person spends less time with his or her friends or relatives than does his or her job.

For this types of people goals completion are more important rather that are going out with someone who their well know.

They have plans and diseases which make them feel alive.

However, sometimes, at the end their life, they become lonely and some of them die very quickly after retirement.

On the other hand, there are people who appreciate their relationships with relatives and friends.

For them working in an office is tougher than eating out with a mate.

For this kind of people work is not as important as walking in the park with their family.

They like to call a friend and speak for hours.

When they are together with a valuable person, they feel alive.

Therefore, at the end of their career they are living happily and have a meaningful life for a long time after retirement.

In conclusion, there are people who have different goals in their life, so some people prefer investing the time in career development to investing time in relationships.

However, in my opinion, spending time with a meaningful person is the most important thing for each human being.