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End of school
Last friday we go at beach with school.
It was a very good moment we did castel with the sand i know i am to tall for this but it was funny time with my friends.
So after we go in the water but not for swimming.
This days was perfect and give me happiness and i can prepare my bac of french now.

Judul
- End of school
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Last friday we go at beach with school.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- It was a very good moment we did castel with the sand i know i am to tall for this but it was funny time with my friends.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- So after we go in the water but not for swimming.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- This days was perfect and give me happiness and i can prepare my bac of french now.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4