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End of school
Last friday we go at beach with school.
It was a very good moment we did castel with the sand i know i am to tall for this but it was funny time with my friends.
So after we go in the water but not for swimming.
This days was perfect and give me happiness and i can prepare my bac of french now.

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- Last friday we go at beach with school.
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문장 2
- It was a very good moment we did castel with the sand i know i am to tall for this but it was funny time with my friends.
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- So after we go in the water but not for swimming.
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문장 4
- This days was perfect and give me happiness and i can prepare my bac of french now.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4