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Hello
So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye

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- So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
  ¡Vota ahora!
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- I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye
  ¡Vota ahora!
- ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2