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Hello
So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye

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- So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye
  Vote now!
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