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I'm graduate
Recently I finished my university.
Now I have a job but it's not majoring.
My specialty is management and I should work more time for what I will become manager.
It's not my dream but it will be good.
I would like to work in advertising.
But at first I want to improve my English :)

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- I'm graduate
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- Recently I finished my university.
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- Now I have a job but it's not majoring.
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- My specialty is management and I should work more time for what I will become manager.
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- It's not my dream but it will be good.
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- I would like to work in advertising.
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- But at first I want to improve my English :)
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