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I'm graduate
Recently I finished my university.
Now I have a job but it's not majoring.
My specialty is management and I should work more time for what I will become manager.
It's not my dream but it will be good.
I would like to work in advertising.
But at first I want to improve my English :)

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标题
- I'm graduate
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Recently I finished my university.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Now I have a job but it's not majoring.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- My specialty is management and I should work more time for what I will become manager.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- It's not my dream but it will be good.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I would like to work in advertising.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- But at first I want to improve my English :)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6