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  • Teacher VS Student: Who is More Important?

  • In the modern world education is the most important process which makes human beings move forward based on experience and knowledge from other people.
  • Nowadays, there are people who believe that a teacher with the right qualities plays a vital role in teaching people.
  • However, others think that a student itself has to have the necessary skills for receiving knowledge efficiently.
  • In this essay I am going to discuss both points of views and argue that it is more important is to be a good student than to have a good teacher for studying.
  • On the one hand, this kind of teachers has to have the ability to motivate their students as well as receive the feedback from students and makes changing during the process.
  • For instance, if students in a class do not understand a particular subject, this teacher should noticed that immediately and try to give more real-life examples.
  • Sometimes, some subjects are not so interested for students, so in this case the teacher should give them arguments why this subject is important for their future career development or show a real-life appliance of his knowledge about the subject.
  • On the other hand, if a student has all necessary qualities to study well, it helps them to receive knowledge from a mediocre teacher whose skills to educate people are not so well inefficient.
  • For example, this kind of student, in the case of bad teaching could read more books on certain subject and do more exercises at home.
  • To conclude, in my opinion, the most important things in the educational process is to be a good student than to has a good teacher because this type of student could easily compensate lack of teacher’s skills by self-studying.

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    • In the modern world education is the most important process which makes human beings move forward based on experience and knowledge from other people.
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    • Nowadays, there are people who believe that a teacher with the right qualities plays a vital role in teaching people.
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    • However, others think that a student itself has to have the necessary skills for receiving knowledge efficiently.
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    • In this essay I am going to discuss both points of views and argue that it is more important is to be a good student than to have a good teacher for studying.
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    • On the one hand, this kind of teachers has to have the ability to motivate their students as well as receive the feedback from students and makes changing during the process.
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    • For instance, if students in a class do not understand a particular subject, this teacher should noticed that immediately and try to give more real-life examples.
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    • Sometimes, some subjects are not so interested for students, so in this case the teacher should give them arguments why this subject is important for their future career development or show a real-life appliance of his knowledge about the subject.
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    • On the other hand, if a student has all necessary qualities to study well, it helps them to receive knowledge from a mediocre teacher whose skills to educate people are not so well inefficient.
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    • For example, this kind of student, in the case of bad teaching could read more books on certain subject and do more exercises at home.
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    • To conclude, in my opinion, the most important things in the educational process is to be a good student than to has a good teacher because this type of student could easily compensate lack of teacher’s skills by self-studying.
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