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who i am?
Hi my name is Victor.
I have twenty years old.
And i try to learn English because is a very important language.
Sometimes i like watch anime and manga for example today i was watched naruto all the day.Normally i am always sleeping in the day off.
I work on pools Monday to saturday and i love my work I think is all for today please correct me I write in thirty minutes i know is incredible

victortrhJuly 2014Undi sekarang!
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Title
- who i am?
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi my name is Victor.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I have twenty years old.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- And i try to learn English because is a very important language.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Sometimes i like watch anime and manga for example today i was watched naruto all the day.Normally i am always sleeping in the day off.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- I work on pools Monday to saturday and i love my work I think is all for today please correct me I write in thirty minutes i know is incredible
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5