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who i am?
Hi my name is Victor.
I have twenty years old.
And i try to learn English because is a very important language.
Sometimes i like watch anime and manga for example today i was watched naruto all the day.Normally i am always sleeping in the day off.
I work on pools Monday to saturday and i love my work I think is all for today please correct me I write in thirty minutes i know is incredible

victortrhJuly 2014Bầu chọn ngay!
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- who i am?
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câu 1
- Hi my name is Victor.
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câu 2
- I have twenty years old.
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câu 3
- And i try to learn English because is a very important language.
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câu 4
- Sometimes i like watch anime and manga for example today i was watched naruto all the day.Normally i am always sleeping in the day off.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- I work on pools Monday to saturday and i love my work I think is all for today please correct me I write in thirty minutes i know is incredible
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5