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  • No one lived so wonderfully and freely as Princess Lindagul.
  • Through the window glass, made of rock crystal, sun rays reached into her marble palace.
  • There she rested nightly on soft silk pillows and when the morning came her servants took her out to a wonderful pool made of ivory and mother-of-pearl.
  • By day she sewed with silk and gold, played the zithern and walked in the garden under the palm trees, listening to the singing of the birds and gambolling like a kid among the butterflies and roses.
  • After all Princess Lindagul was merely twelve years old.
  • However twelve years (old) (on) in the South is like sixteen (years old) in the North.
  • It's not very nice to live in luxury and see all your wishes fulfilled at the smallest wave of a hand.
  • A lot of people are getting overcome with pride and whims.
  • Princes Lindagul wasn't one of them.
  • But bit by bit she got bored.
  • She didn't know why it (had) happened but (the) flight of butterflies, perfume of flowers and sounds of a zithern didn't amuse her anymore.
  • She began noticing with wonder that often she wanted to cry.
  • Neither she nor her maidservants could get clue what it arose from.
  • Eventually, she comprehended why she couldn't rejoice anymore.
  • It must have been because she felt like a captive in her own palace.
  • She desired at least once to rejoice at peoples' crowd in the big city Isfahan.
  • And that's why once when (the) father visited her again she asked him to allow her to see (a)the beasts duel which was supposed to take place on Shah's birthday.

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