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Κείμενο από Darina1997 - English

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  • No one lived so wonderfully and freely as Princess Lindagul.
  • Through the window glass, made of rock crystal, sun rays reached into her marble palace.
  • There she rested nightly on soft silk pillows and when the morning came her servants took her out to a wonderful pool made of ivory and mother-of-pearl.
  • By day she sewed with silk and gold, played the zithern and walked in the garden under the palm trees, listening to the singing of the birds and gambolling like a kid among the butterflies and roses.
  • After all Princess Lindagul was merely twelve years old.
  • However twelve years (old) (on) in the South is like sixteen (years old) in the North.
  • It's not very nice to live in luxury and see all your wishes fulfilled at the smallest wave of a hand.
  • A lot of people are getting overcome with pride and whims.
  • Princes Lindagul wasn't one of them.
  • But bit by bit she got bored.
  • She didn't know why it (had) happened but (the) flight of butterflies, perfume of flowers and sounds of a zithern didn't amuse her anymore.
  • She began noticing with wonder that often she wanted to cry.
  • Neither she nor her maidservants could get clue what it arose from.
  • Eventually, she comprehended why she couldn't rejoice anymore.
  • It must have been because she felt like a captive in her own palace.
  • She desired at least once to rejoice at peoples' crowd in the big city Isfahan.
  • And that's why once when (the) father visited her again she asked him to allow her to see (a)the beasts duel which was supposed to take place on Shah's birthday.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English