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  • life style

  • It is undeniable that the life style has changed enormously during last few decades due to the huge impact of modern technology and economic development.
  • Some people believe that modern life is much better than in past.
  • As evidence of this, they point to improvements in healthcare and education and the general increase in the standard of living .
  • Furthermore,they argue that machines have changed working conditions and reduced the need for hard physical labour , and they talk about the large leisure industries that have transformed people ,s free time.
  • On the other hand , it can also argued that some changes have had a negative impact on our life .
  • For example, there has a negative impact on both the natural an human environments .
  • In addition,stress from all the pressure in today 's schools and work place may have reduced the quality of life in social terms.
  • Having access to more things and more entertainment cannot compensate for the loss of social relationship.One reason for this loss is that families spend less time together and , as a result ,crime rates an divorce rates have increased and people have lost any sense of community.
  • In conclusion, i think there is evidence to suggest that some of the changes we have experienced in the modern world have affected our lives in a negative way, especially in terms of the family and the environment.But overall, it is clear that most of these changes have been good foe the majority of people.
  • Nevertheless,I feel we need to ensure that these positive changes can be sustained and shared more in the future.

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    • It is undeniable that the life style has changed enormously during last few decades due to the huge impact of modern technology and economic development.
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    • As evidence of this, they point to improvements in healthcare and education and the general increase in the standard of living .
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    • Furthermore,they argue that machines have changed working conditions and reduced the need for hard physical labour , and they talk about the large leisure industries that have transformed people ,s free time.
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    • In addition,stress from all the pressure in today 's schools and work place may have reduced the quality of life in social terms.
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    • Having access to more things and more entertainment cannot compensate for the loss of social relationship.One reason for this loss is that families spend less time together and , as a result ,crime rates an divorce rates have increased and people have lost any sense of community.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 9
    • In conclusion, i think there is evidence to suggest that some of the changes we have experienced in the modern world have affected our lives in a negative way, especially in terms of the family and the environment.But overall, it is clear that most of these changes have been good foe the majority of people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Nevertheless,I feel we need to ensure that these positive changes can be sustained and shared more in the future.
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