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Hello!
My name is Nastya, I'm 17.
I live in Kogalym, Russia.
Kogalym it's a small city in western Siberia.
The town soon will be 30 years.
Winter here lasts 8 months.
It's cold and very much a snow.
Even summer it's raining and the sky is overcast.
Sometimes sun's trying to come out, but it's often.
The weather is getting warmer only on 2-3 weeks in year.
Therefore, many children leave from city on holidays.
Parents send their kids to summer camps, in other countries or to Grandma's village.
Speaking for myself, I with my brother were in Egypt on July.
We had a good time!

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- My name is Nastya, I'm 17.
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- I live in Kogalym, Russia.
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- Kogalym it's a small city in western Siberia.
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- The town soon will be 30 years.
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- Winter here lasts 8 months.
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- It's cold and very much a snow.
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- Even summer it's raining and the sky is overcast.
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- Sometimes sun's trying to come out, but it's often.
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- The weather is getting warmer only on 2-3 weeks in year.
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- Therefore, many children leave from city on holidays.
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- Parents send their kids to summer camps, in other countries or to Grandma's village.
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- Speaking for myself, I with my brother were in Egypt on July.
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- We had a good time!
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