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  • Hello!

  • My name is Nastya, I'm 17.
  • I live in Kogalym, Russia.
  • Kogalym it's a small city in western Siberia.
  • The town soon will be 30 years.
  • Winter here lasts 8 months.
  • It's cold and very much a snow.
  • Even summer it's raining and the sky is overcast.
  • Sometimes sun's trying to come out, but it's often.
  • The weather is getting warmer only on 2-3 weeks in year.
  • Therefore, many children leave from city on holidays.
  • Parents send their kids to summer camps, in other countries or to Grandma's village.
  • Speaking for myself, I with my brother were in Egypt on July.
  • We had a good time!

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