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Official e-mail
Dear Mrs.---, I am writing to enquire about my arrival in the student house --- on 1st october 2014.
I wolud like to know if it's possible to receive the keys of my room that same day.
I see that your office will be open until 16:00 h.
I will arrive by train,but until now I don't know exactly when I will arrive.
Just in case, is it possible to have it out of hours?( we can keep us in touch).
If I will arrive in time , do I have to come to your office in ---- to receive it?
Thanking you in advance Yours sincerely, Veronica

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- Dear Mrs.---, I am writing to enquire about my arrival in the student house --- on 1st october 2014.
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- I wolud like to know if it's possible to receive the keys of my room that same day.
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- I see that your office will be open until 16:00 h.
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- I will arrive by train,but until now I don't know exactly when I will arrive.
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- Just in case, is it possible to have it out of hours?( we can keep us in touch).
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- If I will arrive in time , do I have to come to your office in ---- to receive it?
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- Thanking you in advance Yours sincerely, Veronica
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