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  • The presented graph illustrates the fluctuations of temperature during the year in London, New York and Sydney, while the table demonstrates the amount of sunshine per year in those cities.
  • The coldest months in London and New York are January and December when the average temperature falls down 8 and 5 degrees respectively.
  • Since February the temperature starts rising gradually and reaches its peak in July (over 23 degrees).
  • Overall, during the period from June and the middle of September, the average temperature in New York is about 25 degrees and in London is 20 degrees.
  • After this period, the temperature goes down gradually until its coldest peak in December.
  • In contrast to this, the temperature in Sydney is steadier and fluctuates between 16 degrees in July and 25 degrees from November until March.
  • Despite the fact that the average annual temperature is higher in Sydney, New York has a bit more hours of sunshine (2,535) then Sydney (2,473).
  • Meantime, the yearly hours of sunshine in London is twice less than in both Sydney and New York.
  • To conclude, London is the coldest city with a fewest amount of sunshine.
  • The most stable climate is in Sydney while New York has the hottest summers.

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    • The presented graph illustrates the fluctuations of temperature during the year in London, New York and Sydney, while the table demonstrates the amount of sunshine per year in those cities.
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    • The coldest months in London and New York are January and December when the average temperature falls down 8 and 5 degrees respectively.
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    • Overall, during the period from June and the middle of September, the average temperature in New York is about 25 degrees and in London is 20 degrees.
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    • In contrast to this, the temperature in Sydney is steadier and fluctuates between 16 degrees in July and 25 degrees from November until March.
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    • Despite the fact that the average annual temperature is higher in Sydney, New York has a bit more hours of sunshine (2,535) then Sydney (2,473).
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