Opravy

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Neopraveno

Text od Anjuna - English

Původní Verze
Opravená verze

Hello my friends!
Im Ignacio from Argentina.
Y live in Buenos Aires the capital of my country.
Im 29 years old.
I really want to learn english, for now i just can read a little but no much.
My hobbys are listen electronic music, see the football (Soccer in USA) and draw.
This is all for now! Bye!

AnjunaSeptember 2014Vote now!
- Oznámit jako spam?

PROSÍM, POMOŽTE OPRAVIT KAŽDOU VĚTU! - English

Titul
- Hello my friends!
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Titul
Sentence 1
- Im Ignacio from Argentina.
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- Y live in Buenos Aires the capital of my country.
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- Im 29 years old.
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 3
Sentence 4
- I really want to learn english, for now i just can read a little but no much.
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 4
Sentence 5
- My hobbys are listen electronic music, see the football (Soccer in USA) and draw.
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 5
Sentence 6
- This is all for now! Bye!
  Vote now!
- PŘIDAT NOVOU OPRAVU! - Sentence 6