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Hello my friends!
Im Ignacio from Argentina.
Y live in Buenos Aires the capital of my country.
Im 29 years old.
I really want to learn english, for now i just can read a little but no much.
My hobbys are listen electronic music, see the football (Soccer in USA) and draw.
This is all for now! Bye!

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- Im Ignacio from Argentina.
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- Y live in Buenos Aires the capital of my country.
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- Im 29 years old.
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- I really want to learn english, for now i just can read a little but no much.
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- My hobbys are listen electronic music, see the football (Soccer in USA) and draw.
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- This is all for now! Bye!
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