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  • Origin of Chinese Spring Festival

  • Why Chinese love red and why Chinese Spring Festival?
  • Because Chinese ancestor believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendar,all gods will go back to heanven.
  • Without gods' protection,a monster named “year”comes out to hurt people,bringing with disaster to the world.
  • But it has an vital point that being afraid of red,so Chinese make red firework,red lanterns,red paper-cuts ect.
  • The most special red thing is red packet,which is given by parents and relative,containting good fortune and wishes,protecting children going through the year.
  • There is an advertisement of Mcdonald's that the monster "year"stoped three people and asked them for the pies.However a man broke apart the pie and told the "year"that was a red bean pie,then the "year"was scare away.It is creative advertisement.

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    • Because Chinese ancestor believed that at the end of the year of lunar calendar,all gods will go back to heanven.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Without gods' protection,a monster named “year”comes out to hurt people,bringing with disaster to the world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • But it has an vital point that being afraid of red,so Chinese make red firework,red lanterns,red paper-cuts ect.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • The most special red thing is red packet,which is given by parents and relative,containting good fortune and wishes,protecting children going through the year.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • There is an advertisement of Mcdonald's that the monster "year"stoped three people and asked them for the pies.However a man broke apart the pie and told the "year"that was a red bean pie,then the "year"was scare away.It is creative advertisement.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6