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Using Car
People use their cars instead of public cars.
Thus, the demand of petrol will increase.
Some critics confirmed that we need to import more petrol to meet the demand.
It is true that when demand increased, the price will be up.
Moreover, Cars not only effect energy saving policy but also cause environmental problems such as pollution and noise.

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- People use their cars instead of public cars.
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- Thus, the demand of petrol will increase.
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- Some critics confirmed that we need to import more petrol to meet the demand.
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- It is true that when demand increased, the price will be up.
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- Moreover, Cars not only effect energy saving policy but also cause environmental problems such as pollution and noise.
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