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  • Using Car

  • People use their cars instead of public cars.
  • Thus, the demand of petrol will increase.
  • Some critics confirmed that we need to import more petrol to meet the demand.
  • It is true that when demand increased, the price will be up.
  • Moreover, Cars not only effect energy saving policy but also cause environmental problems such as pollution and noise.

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