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  • Eco-friendly holiday?

  • A few years ago my family and I went to Turkey.
  • We rent a sailing boat with the whole crew, who were all locals, except the cleaning woman, who was from the Netherlands.
  • The boat was amazing because it was about 30 meters long and we didn’t had to share it with other people.
  • The purpose of our holiday was to relax, to swim and to snorkel. It was great.
  • We also were able to decide where we want to go with the boat, so my family and I saw a lot of beautiful places.
  • I think this kind of a holiday is more ecofriendly than other ones, because we didn’t go to places were a lot of tourists were.
  • Our captain, who was a local, had his own garden where he prepared his own vegetables and fruits, which our cook used for the meals.
  • I think because of that, there wasn’t so much garbage, since they hadn’t any wrapping.
  • In the evening we all sat together and we talked about a lot of things, such as the culture of Turkey.
  • We even had the chance to get to know some of the friends of our captain.
  • I think such trips have a very positive impact for the local people, since they get the money and not the huge companies.
  • In my opinion my CO2 footprint wasn’t too big, because we only were on the sailing boat.
  • I would totally go there for a second time.
  • I haven’t any plans for my next holiday yet, so I might search in the internet for a more eco-friendly holiday, but I think there is also the chance, that my next holiday might be less eco-friendly than this one.

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    • We rent a sailing boat with the whole crew, who were all locals, except the cleaning woman, who was from the Netherlands.
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    • The boat was amazing because it was about 30 meters long and we didn’t had to share it with other people.
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    • We also were able to decide where we want to go with the boat, so my family and I saw a lot of beautiful places.
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    • I think this kind of a holiday is more ecofriendly than other ones, because we didn’t go to places were a lot of tourists were.
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    • Our captain, who was a local, had his own garden where he prepared his own vegetables and fruits, which our cook used for the meals.
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    • In the evening we all sat together and we talked about a lot of things, such as the culture of Turkey.
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    • I think such trips have a very positive impact for the local people, since they get the money and not the huge companies.
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    • I haven’t any plans for my next holiday yet, so I might search in the internet for a more eco-friendly holiday, but I think there is also the chance, that my next holiday might be less eco-friendly than this one.
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