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  • Essay

  • No one would disagree that tourism has strongly developed in many countries for the last few years.
  • Such countries as Egypt, Spain, Thailand, Greece, Turkey and Italy let in an enormous crowd of tourist each year.
  • They provide a high-quality service to them for a reasonable price and have a high return out of this segment of economy.
  • However not every tourist has good manners, so the environment and the exterior of the cities suffers of litter, dropped by such people.
  • Many places in the world are now flooded with tourists and the range of their bad influence is sometimes catastrophic, and the government should ban tourism here.
  • For example on some shores of the Baikal there is no grass and soil left because of wheels cars, some “wild” tourists cut trees, burn fires, leave litter right there.
  • The government of the country can also support green tourism and encourage tourists to respect the area of the visit.
  • In some countries, which economy highly depends on tourism it would be a good solution.
  • To my mind the decision taken by the government of the country should be logical.
  • If the environment strongly suffers from tourists, then it should be prohibited to visit this place.
  • If the damage isn’t appreciable or the economic situation doesn’t let it to stop flows of tourists, then it should hold to a second strategy, to control them.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • However not every tourist has good manners, so the environment and the exterior of the cities suffers of litter, dropped by such people.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • Many places in the world are now flooded with tourists and the range of their bad influence is sometimes catastrophic, and the government should ban tourism here.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • For example on some shores of the Baikal there is no grass and soil left because of wheels cars, some “wild” tourists cut trees, burn fires, leave litter right there.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
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    • If the damage isn’t appreciable or the economic situation doesn’t let it to stop flows of tourists, then it should hold to a second strategy, to control them.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11