Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from linny123 - English

  • an explication letter

  • I think you have seen my resume several days ago and I can understand your opinion about my professional level.
  • I know that in France, the companies prefer the people who obtained a diploma in engineering.
  • In this way I would like to write to you in order to explain and show my passion in working in this company.
  • I collaborated with A in the aim to study automotive lighting systems, especially the light source.
  • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
  • My work has been published in KEY ENGINEERING magazine.
  • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
  • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
  • Please find enclosed the reference of my tutor of final year internship.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • I think you have seen my resume several days ago and I can understand your opinion about my professional level.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9