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  • an explication letter

  • I think you have seen my resume several days ago and I can understand your opinion about my professional level.
  • I know that in France, the companies prefer the people who obtained a diploma in engineering.
  • In this way I would like to write to you in order to explain and show my passion in working in this company.
  • I collaborated with A in the aim to study automotive lighting systems, especially the light source.
  • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
  • My work has been published in KEY ENGINEERING magazine.
  • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
  • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
  • Please find enclosed the reference of my tutor of final year internship.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • I think you have seen my resume several days ago and I can understand your opinion about my professional level.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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  • veta 3
    • In this way I would like to write to you in order to explain and show my passion in working in this company.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
  • veta 4
  • veta 5
    • I characterized the thermal and optical properties of the lamps and succeeded in developing complex models of the light source.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
  • veta 6
  • veta 7
    • I choose University Pairs 6 because it is a top ranking University in the world, however, the diploma in engineering in France was just considered as master degree in China last year.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
  • veta 8
    • Besides, Mr. A knows that I graduated from a famous University .Compare with other candidates, I think I have more experience in optical engineering and I have confidence about my professional level.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
  • veta 9