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Text from LuanaRbcht - English

  • a draw description

  • This document is a drawing by Nicholson draws in 2004.
  • It's extract to his web site www.nicholdoncartoons.com.au.
  • It deals about australian who want reconcile with aboriginal.
  • The title it's maybe Reconciliation because it's write this on a banner.
  • On this draw, we can see a striking contrast with the traditional family (mother, dad, and two child) who his on the bridge and the couple under.
  • The family walk over the bridge with a slogan and badge for make believe they want reconcile, their gesture are hypocritical because they don't think at a reconciliation they don't be aware of the life than people can have.
  • Like a tramp aboriginal, are beggar and alcoholic they have not a house, they are in dire straits.
  • All the day they drinks a lot of wine, we can see on the draw the empty bottle and not really stuff to them, same not the bare necessities.
  • My opinion about that it's there was no interest at be hypocritical because after all turns against us and the beautiful action becomes ugly.
  • For me we can help all the people who are in difficulte because must ask a question " and if it'was me? or a person in my family?" we would like obtain a real help.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • On this draw, we can see a striking contrast with the traditional family (mother, dad, and two child) who his on the bridge and the couple under.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • The family walk over the bridge with a slogan and badge for make believe they want reconcile, their gesture are hypocritical because they don't think at a reconciliation they don't be aware of the life than people can have.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • All the day they drinks a lot of wine, we can see on the draw the empty bottle and not really stuff to them, same not the bare necessities.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • My opinion about that it's there was no interest at be hypocritical because after all turns against us and the beautiful action becomes ugly.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • For me we can help all the people who are in difficulte because must ask a question " and if it'was me? or a person in my family?" we would like obtain a real help.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10