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  • This document is a drawing by Nicholson draws in 2004.
  • It's extract to his web site www.nicholdoncartoons.com.au.
  • It deals about australian who want reconcile with aboriginal.
  • The title it's maybe Reconciliation because it's write this on a banner.
  • On this draw, we can see a striking contrast with the traditional family (mother, dad, and two child) who his on the bridge and the couple under.
  • The family walk over the bridge with a slogan and badge for make believe they want reconcile, their gesture are hypocritical because they don't think at a reconciliation they don't be aware of the life than people can have.
  • Like a tramp aboriginal, are beggar and alcoholic they have not a house, they are in dire straits.
  • All the day they drinks a lot of wine, we can see on the draw the empty bottle and not really stuff to them, same not the bare necessities.
  • My opinion about that it's there was no interest at be hypocritical because after all turns against us and the beautiful action becomes ugly.
  • For me we can help all the people who are in difficulte because must ask a question " and if it'was me? or a person in my family?" we would like obtain a real help.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • On this draw, we can see a striking contrast with the traditional family (mother, dad, and two child) who his on the bridge and the couple under.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • The family walk over the bridge with a slogan and badge for make believe they want reconcile, their gesture are hypocritical because they don't think at a reconciliation they don't be aware of the life than people can have.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • All the day they drinks a lot of wine, we can see on the draw the empty bottle and not really stuff to them, same not the bare necessities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • My opinion about that it's there was no interest at be hypocritical because after all turns against us and the beautiful action becomes ugly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • For me we can help all the people who are in difficulte because must ask a question " and if it'was me? or a person in my family?" we would like obtain a real help.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10