Düzeltmeler

mapip'den mesaj - English

  • Inventions

  • As introduction I have to say that there are a lot of inventions that makes our life easier, and television is one of them, On the other hand, I don´t think that television is the most important invention in our century.
  • From my point of view there isn´t any doubt that internet plays a more relevant role in our everyday lifes.
  • It´s true that television brought films and news into people´s homes, but since internet had appeard, almost everybody downloads films, TV series and ebooks.
  • We use it to get in touch with family and friends who lives far from our city or our country and also to get information for our jobs.
  • I´m sure that thirty years ago it was imposible to imagine that we will be able to call abroad withouth a huge charge in our phone tax.
  • And no word to speak and watch each other by a web cam.
  • What is more, modern life makes that lots of busy people don´t have enough time to enjoy watching their favourites soup operas or TV game shows, therefore they couldn´t watch that programs on the TV, but now they could enjoy them thank to Internet.
  • In conclusion I want to propose Internet for the best invention in our century because the main part of the people couldn´t live withouth that amazing part of technology.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

  • Başlık
  • cümle 1
    • As introduction I have to say that there are a lot of inventions that makes our life easier, and television is one of them, On the other hand, I don´t think that television is the most important invention in our century.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • It´s true that television brought films and news into people´s homes, but since internet had appeard, almost everybody downloads films, TV series and ebooks.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • We use it to get in touch with family and friends who lives far from our city or our country and also to get information for our jobs.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • I´m sure that thirty years ago it was imposible to imagine that we will be able to call abroad withouth a huge charge in our phone tax.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
  • cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • What is more, modern life makes that lots of busy people don´t have enough time to enjoy watching their favourites soup operas or TV game shows, therefore they couldn´t watch that programs on the TV, but now they could enjoy them thank to Internet.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
    • In conclusion I want to propose Internet for the best invention in our century because the main part of the people couldn´t live withouth that amazing part of technology.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8