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  • Inventions

  • As introduction I have to say that there are a lot of inventions that makes our life easier, and television is one of them, On the other hand, I don´t think that television is the most important invention in our century.
  • From my point of view there isn´t any doubt that internet plays a more relevant role in our everyday lifes.
  • It´s true that television brought films and news into people´s homes, but since internet had appeard, almost everybody downloads films, TV series and ebooks.
  • We use it to get in touch with family and friends who lives far from our city or our country and also to get information for our jobs.
  • I´m sure that thirty years ago it was imposible to imagine that we will be able to call abroad withouth a huge charge in our phone tax.
  • And no word to speak and watch each other by a web cam.
  • What is more, modern life makes that lots of busy people don´t have enough time to enjoy watching their favourites soup operas or TV game shows, therefore they couldn´t watch that programs on the TV, but now they could enjoy them thank to Internet.
  • In conclusion I want to propose Internet for the best invention in our century because the main part of the people couldn´t live withouth that amazing part of technology.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • As introduction I have to say that there are a lot of inventions that makes our life easier, and television is one of them, On the other hand, I don´t think that television is the most important invention in our century.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • From my point of view there isn´t any doubt that internet plays a more relevant role in our everyday lifes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • It´s true that television brought films and news into people´s homes, but since internet had appeard, almost everybody downloads films, TV series and ebooks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • We use it to get in touch with family and friends who lives far from our city or our country and also to get information for our jobs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I´m sure that thirty years ago it was imposible to imagine that we will be able to call abroad withouth a huge charge in our phone tax.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • What is more, modern life makes that lots of busy people don´t have enough time to enjoy watching their favourites soup operas or TV game shows, therefore they couldn´t watch that programs on the TV, but now they could enjoy them thank to Internet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • In conclusion I want to propose Internet for the best invention in our century because the main part of the people couldn´t live withouth that amazing part of technology.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8