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In today's world, teenagers hardly read anything bacause they spend too much time watching films or videos on computers.
This problem is mainly caused by the earliest accessibility children have on technology.
On the one hand, it is often said technology is a perfect tool for teenagers' education since increaces the opportunities for a better understanding of new knowledge.
Furthermore, on internet they can find lots of books based on their interests wich can motivate them to read.
On the other hand technology is seen as a distraction for teenagers because they do not leave an important period of time for educational issues such as read.
In my opinion technology is important and useful for teenagers interested in the literature area.
However, the use of this tool must be balanced between teenagers interests and reading.

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Oración 1
- In today's world, teenagers hardly read anything bacause they spend too much time watching films or videos on computers.
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Oración 2
- This problem is mainly caused by the earliest accessibility children have on technology.
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Oración 3
- On the one hand, it is often said technology is a perfect tool for teenagers' education since increaces the opportunities for a better understanding of new knowledge.
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Oración 4
- Furthermore, on internet they can find lots of books based on their interests wich can motivate them to read.
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Oración 5
- On the other hand technology is seen as a distraction for teenagers because they do not leave an important period of time for educational issues such as read.
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Oración 6
- In my opinion technology is important and useful for teenagers interested in the literature area.
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Oración 7
- However, the use of this tool must be balanced between teenagers interests and reading.
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