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The hero moment A big yard with a lot of toys plus aria of sand to build homes and castels that what catch the children to stay in.

The same place where my hero memont happend.

I was 10 years old.

Some people were calling me " the smart girl", but my friends were calling me " the stupid girl" until the last day of the horrbile name came at our yard about 9 p.m.

My friend and I went to the yard with an exicted faces.

The weather was cloudy " Oh.

It seems raining" we did not care about the weather, all what we cared about was to stay in the yard playing for along time.

My friends Ali was running away suddenly, he disapeared.

We did not notice until we decided to back homes.

We were screaming "Ali, Ali, Ali" but no answer.

While we were serching, I found a big hole and heard sound of crying, that was Ali.

I shouted to my friends come but no one hear me because the sound of thunder was so loudly.

There was no time to waste.

I was thinking and thinking how can i help my friend.

Then I found big and old toys looked like a car I took it and give Ali to climb above.

After that, I could catch his hand and submitted him to top.

We ran to home by wet clothes.

They all knew I saved his life.

That was a proud moment.

I felt some energy and comfortable to save someone's life.

I did not from were the power came to me but I believe it was from God.

The bad name changed to " the hero girl" Every one of my school became ask me about my hero moment.

I will help peple as much as posspile to save alot of lives.

My frist rule is "it dose not matter who you are but what you do in your life"