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Hiii
Above all, I had written this text message because I'm a novice on the site.
Certainly, for correct grammatical flaw.
I registered here because I need english for work.
So I'd like to see if someone can help me.
And will friend for me.
I look for a nice guy first, also to make friendships.
If you want to learn Arabic or Persian I'm a professional tutor.
I want to get a real conversation with him or her with American or British people.
It means pepole who speak fluently in english.
Shine my page with your reply.
Thank you for advance!

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- Hiii
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문장 1
- Above all, I had written this text message because I'm a novice on the site.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Certainly, for correct grammatical flaw.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I registered here because I need english for work.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- So I'd like to see if someone can help me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- And will friend for me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I look for a nice guy first, also to make friendships.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- If you want to learn Arabic or Persian I'm a professional tutor.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- I want to get a real conversation with him or her with American or British people.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
문장 9
- It means pepole who speak fluently in english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
문장 10
- Shine my page with your reply.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
문장 11
- Thank you for advance!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11