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Hiii
Above all, I had written this text message because I'm a novice on the site.
Certainly, for correct grammatical flaw.
I registered here because I need english for work.
So I'd like to see if someone can help me.
And will friend for me.
I look for a nice guy first, also to make friendships.
If you want to learn Arabic or Persian I'm a professional tutor.
I want to get a real conversation with him or her with American or British people.
It means pepole who speak fluently in english.
Shine my page with your reply.
Thank you for advance!

标题
- Hiii
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Above all, I had written this text message because I'm a novice on the site.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Certainly, for correct grammatical flaw.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I registered here because I need english for work.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- So I'd like to see if someone can help me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- And will friend for me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I look for a nice guy first, also to make friendships.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- If you want to learn Arabic or Persian I'm a professional tutor.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I want to get a real conversation with him or her with American or British people.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- It means pepole who speak fluently in english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- Shine my page with your reply.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
句子 11
- Thank you for advance!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11