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Do you like to buy shoes on the internet?
Yes, I will buy the shoes on the internet.
There are two reasons.
First one is the convenience.
Because if you want to buy shoes on the internet, what you need to do is just click the button on the website.
Secondly, the price of shoes on the internet is more competent than in the real shop.
They have more promotion and discount.
So that is why I will choose internet to buy shoes.

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- Do you like to buy shoes on the internet?
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- Yes, I will buy the shoes on the internet.
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- There are two reasons.
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- First one is the convenience.
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- Because if you want to buy shoes on the internet, what you need to do is just click the button on the website.
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- Secondly, the price of shoes on the internet is more competent than in the real shop.
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- They have more promotion and discount.
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- So that is why I will choose internet to buy shoes.
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