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  • Do you like to buy shoes on the internet?

  • Yes, I will buy the shoes on the internet.
  • There are two reasons.
  • First one is the convenience.
  • Because if you want to buy shoes on the internet, what you need to do is just click the button on the website.
  • Secondly, the price of shoes on the internet is more competent than in the real shop.
  • They have more promotion and discount.
  • So that is why I will choose internet to buy shoes.

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