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Today I took a shower. but, I was very cold.
Because first. this season is winter.
I wish today were summer. Second.
I couldn't water control.
Water was hot and cold.
I did water control for 1hour. I'm so hard.
Water temperature control is really bugging me.
I'd come close to get cold.
That was very terrible experience.

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- Today I took a shower. but, I was very cold.
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- Because first. this season is winter.
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- I wish today were summer. Second.
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- I couldn't water control.
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- Water was hot and cold.
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- I did water control for 1hour. I'm so hard.
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- Water temperature control is really bugging me.
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- I'd come close to get cold.
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- That was very terrible experience.
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