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Today I took a shower. but, I was very cold.
Because first. this season is winter.
I wish today were summer. Second.
I couldn't water control.
Water was hot and cold.
I did water control for 1hour. I'm so hard.
Water temperature control is really bugging me.
I'd come close to get cold.
That was very terrible experience.

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câu 1
- Today I took a shower. but, I was very cold.
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câu 2
- Because first. this season is winter.
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câu 3
- I wish today were summer. Second.
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câu 4
- I couldn't water control.
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câu 5
- Water was hot and cold.
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câu 6
- I did water control for 1hour. I'm so hard.
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câu 7
- Water temperature control is really bugging me.
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câu 8
- I'd come close to get cold.
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câu 9
- That was very terrible experience.
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