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Hi!
I'm new here.
I'm seeing some ideas to write, and I think I'm going to choose "Write about what happened today".
Today I woke up very late because I slept very late.
I had lunch with my parents (I ate pasta with cheese and chorizo).
After that I went to my room and I stayed all evening playing on the computer.
My boyfriend came to have dinner before he go out with his friends.
I'm staying at home tonight because I'm ill, but I think I'm going to sleep late again.
Thank you for correct!

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- Hi!
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Cím
Mondat 1
- I'm new here.
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1
Mondat 2
- I'm seeing some ideas to write, and I think I'm going to choose "Write about what happened today".
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2
Mondat 3
- Today I woke up very late because I slept very late.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 3
Mondat 4
- I had lunch with my parents (I ate pasta with cheese and chorizo).
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 4
Mondat 5
- After that I went to my room and I stayed all evening playing on the computer.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 5
Mondat 6
- My boyfriend came to have dinner before he go out with his friends.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 6
Mondat 7
- I'm staying at home tonight because I'm ill, but I think I'm going to sleep late again.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 7
Mondat 8
- Thank you for correct!
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 8