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Hi!
I'm new here.
I'm seeing some ideas to write, and I think I'm going to choose "Write about what happened today".
Today I woke up very late because I slept very late.
I had lunch with my parents (I ate pasta with cheese and chorizo).
After that I went to my room and I stayed all evening playing on the computer.
My boyfriend came to have dinner before he go out with his friends.
I'm staying at home tonight because I'm ill, but I think I'm going to sleep late again.
Thank you for correct!

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- Hi!
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- I'm new here.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm seeing some ideas to write, and I think I'm going to choose "Write about what happened today".
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Today I woke up very late because I slept very late.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I had lunch with my parents (I ate pasta with cheese and chorizo).
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- After that I went to my room and I stayed all evening playing on the computer.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- My boyfriend came to have dinner before he go out with his friends.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I'm staying at home tonight because I'm ill, but I think I'm going to sleep late again.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- Thank you for correct!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8