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Today is a bit cold in Shanghai .
I heard it's snowing in others cities now except Shanghai.
I want to go back to my hometown,Anhui province.
Because I like to see snow-falling .What amazing it is !I've just finished my college .Now I'm working in a trading company as an internship .
My job is to look for potential customer from overseas.
So that's why I am here to practice English.
It's very important for me.
Welcome to your comments and suggestions .Many thanks.

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- Today is a bit cold in Shanghai .
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- I heard it's snowing in others cities now except Shanghai.
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- I want to go back to my hometown,Anhui province.
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- Because I like to see snow-falling .What amazing it is !I've just finished my college .Now I'm working in a trading company as an internship .
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- My job is to look for potential customer from overseas.
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- So that's why I am here to practice English.
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- It's very important for me.
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- Welcome to your comments and suggestions .Many thanks.
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