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Practice English
Today is a bit cold in Shanghai .
I heard it's snowing in others cities now except Shanghai.
I want to go back to my hometown,Anhui province.
Because I like to see snow-falling .What amazing it is !I've just finished my college .Now I'm working in a trading company as an internship .
My job is to look for potential customer from overseas.
So that's why I am here to practice English.
It's very important for me.
Welcome to your comments and suggestions .Many thanks.

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- Practice English
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句子 1
- Today is a bit cold in Shanghai .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I heard it's snowing in others cities now except Shanghai.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I want to go back to my hometown,Anhui province.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Because I like to see snow-falling .What amazing it is !I've just finished my college .Now I'm working in a trading company as an internship .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- My job is to look for potential customer from overseas.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- So that's why I am here to practice English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- It's very important for me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- Welcome to your comments and suggestions .Many thanks.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8